Knights
of the Lunch Table
The
Dodgeball Chronicles
Being a new
kid at school is hard to do, but if you can open the magical locker your life
will rule! Artie King the teenage boy who isn’t good at sport but is good at
video games is the main character in this book.
Artie and his big mean sister are going to a new school. Artie will hope that no one will know that
he is horrible at sports but, happily finds friends who accept him as who he
is.
Artie’s soap sandwich had been taken by the bully group named the
HORDE! There is an old school legend, if you get the
old locker open you are the ruler of the school. The legend had come true by Artie
King. Artie now rules the school!!! Joe from the
HORDE is angry and viscous; he must beat
up Artie
King however Arties
friend Percy stops Joe from punching Artie by challenging Joe to a dodge ball fight. If Artie’s team wins against the
HORDE they have to
leave Artie’s group alone and if the HORDE wins Artie must show Joe how to open
up that locker so Joe will rule the school!
Friday after
school you can find out who will rule the school, the Knights or the HORDE. To find out you have to read the
book and not spoil the book to anyone!
I
recommended this book for kids or teenager and even adults, because it’s
frightening being new to a school, reading this book would make you feel more
confident to go to a new school.
By JR
Baquiano
Star: I like how you described the characters
ReplyDeleteStar: I also liked how you talked about the setting and the incident in the book.
Wish: I wish if you could use commas more often, as it confuses the audience about 2 different lines you write.
By preet
Star: Jr, I really like your cliff hanger at the end.
ReplyDeleteStar: Your hook was hook was also a great part of your review.
Wish I wish you didn't start almost every sentence with "Artie" or "Artie's". Otherwise great review
By Yuan Garcia
Love your hook.
ReplyDeleteI liked the font for HORDE.
But I wish there the word HORDE wasn't repetitive.
By: Brandon(:
star: I like how you had bolded some of the words
ReplyDeletestar: I love your cliffhanger
wish: it was perfect
By: veera
I like the way you expressed the characters and the plot, it was very energetic. I also like the way you kept saying HORDE, but I wish you wrote more.
ReplyDeleteThis was Josiah
DeleteStar: I really love how you started with a hook.
ReplyDeleteStar: I like how you related the beginning to the end.
Wish: I would recommend to not use the word HORDE to often, but overall its great.
By: E.J.
Star: I like how you left the reader on a cliff hanger
ReplyDeleteStar: I like how you gave information on the main character
wish: to use a better transitioning sentence
By Ian 8B
Star: I really liked your hook because, its hard going to a new school an you don't know anyone their.
ReplyDeleteStar: I liked how you related the beginning and the end that's smart of you.
wish: I don't recommend you saying HORDE to much but your story is fantastic.
By JOHN (your buddy).
Really great hook, keeps me interested in the review. This also makes you think about how hard it must be in a new school. I would recommend describing more about the characters though.
ReplyDeleteBy: Ghia 8B
I love your ending paragraph.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job of explaining Artie.
I wish that you talked about the knights a little more.
By Dawson
Star: I really like how you put your interpretation at the end.
ReplyDeleteStar: I also liked your hook.
Star: I wish you would have put some cliff hangers.
By: Nyah Edwards
Star: Great job explaining who Artie is
ReplyDeleteStar: Great job that who do you think should read the book
Wish: I think the "HORDE" should not be repetitive
By Ed