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Chillax
Author: Jerry Scott
Have you ever wanted to go to a band concert with your
friend, without your parents?
Jeremy and Hector are those types of people in the story. Jeremy and Hector want to go the best band in the world Gingivitis is the rock god for Jeremy and hector. The Gingivitis are coming to town, so Jeremy works hard to go to the concert.
Will they go to the concert or will they stay home?
Jeremy and Hector are those types of people in the story. Jeremy and Hector want to go the best band in the world Gingivitis is the rock god for Jeremy and hector. The Gingivitis are coming to town, so Jeremy works hard to go to the concert.
Will they go to the concert or will they stay home?
Jeremy and Hector have been friends since Jeremy bit Hector on
the arm. They also have a band which a new name comes in place. However, one-day
Tim’s mom get cancer. Tim is a friend.
Will Tim’s mom get well?
Will Jeremy and hector get Tim something?
Jeremy also has a girlfriend that talks a lot and sometimes it can drowned you in her conversations and her name is Sara. Sara loves something.
Find out in the book!
Will Tim’s mom get well?
Will Jeremy and hector get Tim something?
Jeremy also has a girlfriend that talks a lot and sometimes it can drowned you in her conversations and her name is Sara. Sara loves something.
Find out in the book!
By Nathan Warren
I enjoy how you explained the characters and the story quiet well but I wish you used better punctuation and didn't jump all over the place as much.
ReplyDelete~ Cooper
Star: I liked how you described the friendship between Jeremy and hector
ReplyDeleteStar: I like dhow you recommended this book for certain ages.
Wish: I think you should've parted down the paragraphs into 2 or 3 paragraphs, as it would help you build on ideas.
by: Preet
Star: I liked the way you how you express the characters.
ReplyDeleteStar: Great Hook, it went well with your sentence structure.
Wish: I wish you would've added your opinion of the book and have paragraphs into 2-3 section. - Tracey
Star: great job explaining the characters
ReplyDeleteStar: nice how u recommended the book to people
wish: I wish you didn't jump all over the place and you should have put paragraphs.
by: Bernard
Star: I like your punctuation
ReplyDeleteStar: I like how you asked questions though out the hole thing
Wish: I wish you did not bounce all over the place with Ideas.
sorry about that I had know idea I did that thank you for tell me
DeleteNathan warren
Star: Good summary of the book!
ReplyDeleteStar: Good hook and connection for a first sentence.
Wish: Where're the paragraphs?
By Richard
ok next time ill put more of them
Deletegreat job explaining the characters
ReplyDeletegreat job and who you recommend
I wish you had better grammer
By:Ethan
I liked how you gave it a rating
ReplyDeleteI liked how you explained their friendship
I wish you used a lot better grammar, had better sentence patterns and wouldn't go everywhere with the story
by Jordan.K
Star: I like the way you explained Jeremy and hectors friendship.
ReplyDeleteStar: I like how you gave this story a rate.
Wish: I wish you would of gave me a better problem in the last sentence as your cliff hanger. Also more grammar either than that good job!
By. J.R.
Star: I like hook.
ReplyDeleteStar: I like how you told us about the characters.
Wish: I wish that you would explain more about the problems
By: E.J.
Star: I like how you described there friendship
ReplyDeleteStar: I like how you left a hook
wish: I wish you would have used better grammar, and put your review into paragraphs.
By Ian 8B
I like how you rated and recommended the book to certain people.
ReplyDeleteyou descried the friendship between Jeremy and hector well.
I think you could have connected your sentences better.
-deluca
why special font
ReplyDeleteStar: Great job explaining about Jeremy and Hector
ReplyDeleteStar: Great job how you who recommended who reads the book
Wish: I think you need to fix your grammar and pharagraphs should be there
Ed