Thursday, 3 March 2016

Zits Chillax by Jerry Scott

Zits Chillax
Author:  Jerry Scott

Have you ever wanted to go to a band concert with your friend, without your parents? 

Jeremy and Hector are those types of people in the story. Jeremy and Hector want to go the best band in the world Gingivitis is the rock god for Jeremy and hector.  The Gingivitis are coming to town, so Jeremy works hard to go to the concert.  

Will they go to the concert or will they stay home?

Jeremy and Hector have been friends since Jeremy bit Hector on the arm. They also have a band which a new name comes in place. However, one-day Tim’s mom get cancer. Tim is a friend. 

Will Tim’s mom get well? 

Will Jeremy and hector get Tim something? 

Jeremy also has a girlfriend that talks a lot and sometimes it can drowned you in her conversations and her name is Sara.  Sara loves something. 

Find out in the book!

I give this book a five out of five and this book is for preteens. 


By Nathan Warren


16 comments:

  1. I enjoy how you explained the characters and the story quiet well but I wish you used better punctuation and didn't jump all over the place as much.
    ~ Cooper

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  2. Star: I liked how you described the friendship between Jeremy and hector
    Star: I like dhow you recommended this book for certain ages.
    Wish: I think you should've parted down the paragraphs into 2 or 3 paragraphs, as it would help you build on ideas.
    by: Preet

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  3. Star: I liked the way you how you express the characters.
    Star: Great Hook, it went well with your sentence structure.
    Wish: I wish you would've added your opinion of the book and have paragraphs into 2-3 section. - Tracey

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  4. Star: great job explaining the characters
    Star: nice how u recommended the book to people
    wish: I wish you didn't jump all over the place and you should have put paragraphs.
    by: Bernard

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  5. Star: I like your punctuation
    Star: I like how you asked questions though out the hole thing
    Wish: I wish you did not bounce all over the place with Ideas.

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    1. sorry about that I had know idea I did that thank you for tell me
      Nathan warren

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  6. Star: Good summary of the book!

    Star: Good hook and connection for a first sentence.

    Wish: Where're the paragraphs?

    By Richard

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    1. ok next time ill put more of them

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  7. great job explaining the characters
    great job and who you recommend
    I wish you had better grammer
    By:Ethan

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  8. I liked how you gave it a rating
    I liked how you explained their friendship
    I wish you used a lot better grammar, had better sentence patterns and wouldn't go everywhere with the story
    by Jordan.K

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  9. Star: I like the way you explained Jeremy and hectors friendship.
    Star: I like how you gave this story a rate.
    Wish: I wish you would of gave me a better problem in the last sentence as your cliff hanger. Also more grammar either than that good job!
    By. J.R.

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  10. Star: I like hook.
    Star: I like how you told us about the characters.
    Wish: I wish that you would explain more about the problems
    By: E.J.

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  11. Star: I like how you described there friendship
    Star: I like how you left a hook
    wish: I wish you would have used better grammar, and put your review into paragraphs.
    By Ian 8B

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  12. I like how you rated and recommended the book to certain people.
    you descried the friendship between Jeremy and hector well.
    I think you could have connected your sentences better.
    -deluca

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  13. why special font

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  14. Star: Great job explaining about Jeremy and Hector
    Star: Great job how you who recommended who reads the book
    Wish: I think you need to fix your grammar and pharagraphs should be there

    Ed

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