Five young dragons
set out on an adventure after being locked in a cave for all of their lives.
Here are seven dragon tribes there’s the Seawings, Nightwings, Rainwings,
Mudwings, Skwings, Sandwings and the Icewings each tribe has their own unique
powers.
Each of the five
Dragonets are from different tribes the dragon’s names are Clay the Mudwing,
Tsunami the Seawing, Starflight the Nigthwing, Glory the Rainwing and Sunny the
Sandwing most of this dragon try hard to get along.
All of these dragons
have been told that they must complete a prophecy. There prophecy is to pick a
queen for the Sandwing kingdom so hey must visit each kingdom that a sister is
allied with to pick which sister is most qualified to be queen.
I would recommend
this book to boys the age of 10 to 16 yeas and who likes action fiction books.
Find it at your scholastic book fair to see if these dragonets will complete
their quest or fail and have the war go one forever.
By Ethan Cripps
I liked how you described your characters.
ReplyDeleteI like your recommendation.
I wish you had more of hook.
By: Brandon(:
Star: i liked how you described the characters
ReplyDeleteStar: i liked how you described the setting
Wish ; i wish you had a different idea for the 2nd paragraph.
I liked how you described the characters
ReplyDeleteI liked how you gave a bit of the story
I wish there was more of a cliff hanger
by Jordan.K
Star: I really like how you describe all of the main characters to your audience.
ReplyDeleteStar: I like how you didn't spoil anything to important
Wish: I wish that you would of left my mind thinking about a situation in the story.
Awesome job!
By. J.R.
I like the explanation of the characters in your book, and your hook at the end.
ReplyDeleteI wish you had a better hook at the beginning
Josiah
You explain the characters well.
ReplyDeleteYou describe the tribes well.
Your sentences run on and the review doesn't feel very finished and I wish you took the time to edit it better.
ps, Why would only boys enjoy it? Why just solely recommend to boys?
-Thomas(8B)
Star: I like how you gave information about the dragons
ReplyDeleteStar: I like how you put your sentences in paragraphs
Wish: My wish would be that you would explain more about the book.
By E.J.
great punctuation
ReplyDeletegood job on telling the problem but not the solution
I wish you could have made a better hook
By: Ethan (:
Star: I like how you described the characters
ReplyDeleteStar: I like that you didn't spoil anything
Wish: I wish that you had a better hook