Malice
By: Chris Wooding
Everyone knows a rumor. Or maybe you’ve heard of one or you ‘eve of
one or maybe you’ve made one. But this is no ordinary rumor, you should be
afraid of this one. Seth
is a kid who loves the outside world and its dangers. Seth had a friend named
Luke but one night he disappeared and nobody knew where he was and they
couldn’t find him. Seth thought it was something to do with the powerful rumor Malice. It is
said if you get the right things and say the right words a man call TALL JAKE
will take you to Malice.
Seth got the
right things and said the right words……
but nothing happened but soon the wind began to blow and he heard what
sounded like mice running across the attic floor “Skitter Scatter
Skitter Scatter” and then
he woke up on a steam punk kind of train. Seth had realized he had been taken
to MALICE.
At first Seth
thought it was a dream or a fake. But Seth soon had to face the fact that
everything around him was real and he knew he was in the comic. He whipped his
head back and forth trying to find an exit but there was none, but Seth knew he
HAD to get out of Malice
or else he would be stuck here forever….
Katie a
friend of Seth noticed he was missing so she checked the usual spots that Seth
would be…. but he was nowhere to be found. After searching for hours she was
worried sick but then out of nowhere she found an issue of Malice and when she read it she was shocked
at what she saw………… Seth. If you want
to find out if Seth makes it through Malice you should read the book. It has
action, adventure, horror, romance, and comedy basically everything you would
want in a book. This book kept me on the edge of my seat all the way through
and I hope you read it.
By Connor Leybourne
I like the font you use.
ReplyDeleteI like your hook.
I wish you had a recommendation.
By: Brandon
I like how you changed the font.
ReplyDeleteI like the suspense.
I wish there was a rating.
by Jordan.K
I like your font, it is very spooky.
ReplyDeleteI also like the rat skitter thing.
Your cliff hanger could be better.
Josiah
good beginning
ReplyDeletegood hook
I need a bit more flavor